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I am in the midst of another project for Audio I. This is a two and a half to three minute newscast. Take a listen and let me know what you think of it. I have another week to work on it, so any advice you guys give me, I will probably implement next Monday […]SHARETHIS.addEntry({ title: "Another Project", url: "http://www.moogaman.com/another-project" });
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1 year ago
Ok, now for a bit of a critique. You started getting really interesting and emphatic with your voice in all the appropriate places starting with the story about the dept of social services and their files. That's when the stories SOUNDED really interesting to me. The speech before that wasn't bad, but needed more animation in your voice. Also, towards the beginning you rushed and jumbled a few words here and there, so you may want to clean that up. Again, I didn't hear any of that starting with the social services story and on to the end.
Let me know if you need me to be more specific. Good luck baby!